Can I ask for constructive feedback on a song I rewrote and sang over an instrumental?

I'd like to know what needs improvement from musically inclined people.

I'm not sure if it's okay to ask on this community. Thanks for letting me know!

Looking forward to being a part of this awesome community :)

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    Hi jack I've closed this as a duplicate of a previously asked question with a similar premise. What I will add on top of that, while it may not make sense on the main site, feel free to ask for feedback in our chat.
    – Dom Mod
    Jan 10 '21 at 6:38
  • oka thanks so much
    – geocalc33
    Jan 10 '21 at 6:39
  • Chat's gonna be more suitable for this Jan 10 '21 at 14:59

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